The Lover’s Pond

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andrewberg 02/21/24
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The Lover’s Pond-[IMG=N4Y]
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Desert oasis—
Echoing traces of a sound
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Desert oasis—

Echoing traces of a sound

into memory.

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I had silent dreams.

Scraping together the dregs

of a tinted warmth—

That depthless garden:

star riddled, grass blades adrift

hanging glass fingers.

We were cold. Lonely

things, islands carved from silence,

eyes that could ignite

yet burned at their touch:

I will tell you my secrets.

My daughter, my sun,

you ask, quietly—

under the breath of a moon.

Who was my father?

Stories of water,

in my dream, he’s at the edge

of the lover’s pond.

He was not handsome.

Pointed and callow, his face

of a soft, rose skin.

Stories of desert,

it is said that the heart of

every sand maiden

burns to sate the drought

and in everything she does

thirst surely follows.

It’s a lonely life.

Of a heat never escaped,

exiles we are made,

fates scarcely changed, feel

my heart, beating with the waves

of my oasis:

I stood at the edge

with silent dreams, gathered close,

I imagined love—

fantasies of joy,

I thought I could live that way.

Silent, and alone.

He was not handsome,

or strong, brilliant or brave,

he was brilliance.

I felt it in his

eyes. Nightshade, squeezed in his hand—

its fingers went white.

Aaqlet, listen true:

no stars in the sky’s mirror

ever filled my heart.

Who was your father?

If true love exists, it’s in

the truth between us.

The Lover’s Pond-[IMG=N4Y]
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Desert oasis—
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So well written…! This was so atmospheric and in a few words you managed to set up so much about these characters?? Just wow. As always, a pleasure to read your stuff 🥰 (+ I maaaay have spent 2hrs looking for that second heart pond in the depths :joy: :sob: )

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1 Reply 02/22/24

hope you were just as excited as i was when i found it 🤣 and writing this was fun. thinking i’ll do more short form content in the future to pad out time between stories 🤔

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1 Reply 02/22/24

Reply to: andrewberg

It was neat! I was happy to see something different. Have not explored the depths enough tbh. And yeah you should definitely consider it! :ok_hand:

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1 Reply 02/23/24

Omg andrew??? This is so good???

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1 Reply 02/21/24

thank you link! i’m happy you like it, especially since i’ve enjoyed reading your works as well. ZeLink is my (not so) guilty pleasure :triumph: and in any case, it means a lot :)

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1 Reply 02/23/24
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